Me

I am loud
Affectionate
A hopeless romantic

I hurt easily
I cry when hurt
I'm invisible

I am loyal
I will stick with you until the end
Or until you find someone better to care about

I am always around to give you a kind word
My shoulder is always there for you when you need a good cry
I will give you as much advise that you will allow me to give

It takes me a long time to let go of a friendship
Or of any kind of relationship

Singing
Poetry
Driving at night
And rain

Are four things that make me feel at peace with the world 

I will allow you to walk all over me
Because I am afraid to upset anyone
But I cause pain anyway...

I seem to always be in the way
I am always in the wrong place at the wrong time
I break friendships without trying

People think I am funny
But I use humor as a shield
So that I won't get hurt 

I am a simple small town girl
With nothing much to offer
Except maybe a good song

Author's Note

I AM NOT CONCEDED!!!!!! lol I wrote this for a contest, let me know what u think!

Reviews

[PaperHearts]

I really liked the format of this poem. It was so simple, yet crafted perfectly. There seemed to be a real sense of vulnerability and courage in this piece that I admired, and I thought that it was that honesty that made this such a great write. Every word that you wrote felt so real and so raw, and I liked the fact that you weren't afraid to say exactly how you felt. Nice work,
~PaperHearts

[Alicia™]

Aww, this poem is so sweet… I love the fragile feel the character has to her.

Oh, and I think you meant "conceited" lol. It isn't conceited at all! I love it.

[Wolfwind Words]

This was great! Full of longing love and it shines with simple reality. If you can offer a good song, then all the better for ya! Being a bard has always went long ways to woo the hearts of others.

Great Ink!
Wolfie

[Tomi]

I love this idea of you...

[Dark Empress]

Awesome poem. I love the flow of this poem. You did a great job

[HopelesslyDevoted]

this is so awesome sarah,
i like how you ended the poem and i love how you listed four simple things. its so beautiful! no this does not make you sound conceded. this sounds just like you. but just to let you know. you are a great friend and you are never in the way! I know it feels like that sometimes (i feel like that all the time) but you aren't. you are a much better person and are worth a lot more than you think you are. :) you don't give yourself enough credit. lol
and your a great sister! :) keep writing and keep being yourself!

[Marie Harrison]

Well, I disagree with your poem. I think you have a wealth of good things to offer many people on differing levels too. Maybe you give too much to other people too. You sound like a charming person too!! Love your poem.

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well you sound like a fine friend to have...love the things that bring your peace

[Coyote Poetry]

I like this poem. The description of a positive and strong young lady. We need to be able to handle the good and the bad. Nothing as beautiful as a girl who can sing too. A very good poem.
Coyote

[Intern'l Shultzfeather]

I think you are very sweety maternal, and I love your design