Death

Death

A Poem by sarah

Have you ever felt like death
Is fallowing you
Like it's watching you from behind a wall?

Have you ever felt like death is waiting
Waiting to grab you
And pull you away?

Have you ever felt like death has grabbed you
Has it's hands around your neck
Tightening it's grip?

I have
I feel deaths eyes watching me
Waiting for the end

I don't know if it's there
Or if it's real
But for some reason
I feel it watching me

© 2011 sarah


Author's Note

sarah
I don't know why this popped into my head and I couldn't end it well, so let me know what you think

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In the Native American belief. Death is on your left shoulder always waiting. Old myth if you could move quick enough. You would see him. A very good poem. Most of us get the feeling we are being watched. Thank you for the excellent poem.
Coyote

Posted 13 Years Ago


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Interesting

Posted 13 Years Ago


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scary- i hope its not watching.... :(

Posted 13 Years Ago


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It is interesting. Never have understood why death is personified the way he is though. Oh in the first stanza did you mean following?

Posted 13 Years Ago


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i like it.

Posted 13 Years Ago


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Today I was talking about death with my grandmother. I was telling her how you never expect to die in a harsh or painful way. We expect to just die in our sleep.
Not to sound morbid, but death its self can be interesting.

Posted 13 Years Ago


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My name is Sarah just another Sarah, to go along with the millions of other Sarah's hehe anyway umm...I am really bad at spelling C and grammar it's a pain in the a*s so...yeah I won't U review books .. more..

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