The Statue Of...

Hail the "Statue of Liberty"

The Statue Of...     by Sami Khalil

{A modern Shakespearean Sonnet}

She stands...a torch in hand, mightily proud,

weathering teeming shores and elements,

bearing...broken shackles, greatly unbowed,

heralding freedom's light and monuments.

A glamorous lady... of timeless states,

deemed of words fitting her self's greatest stride,

barren not of our Fathers' advocates,

for none can denigrate duly noted bride.

She stands...at the crossroads of history,

fiercely pleasing souls who long for freedom,

with golden dawns ushering in mystery,

and haloed tales bejeweling bright queendom.

She survives...by the unseen hands, somber,

mourning veterans who abide earthly slumber. 

Reviews

[Ken Simm.]

Not American but even I can feel what is wonderful about this bard across the pond.

[Sami Khalil]

Wow! An honor indeed.You are kind, sir. Thank you kindly for sharing your thoughts and experiences. Will be looking forward for more pages posted.

[willweb]

Beautifully penned Sami. I have been there and she is as majestic as your poem paints her to be.

[Sami Khalil]

Wow! On my bucket list sir WillWeb. I'm so glad you got to see her. A symbol of America and freedom. Million thank yous for taking the time and effort. See you in TX.

[Lisasview]

Forgot to say that I absolutely love the image your chose!!!!!

[Lisasview]

Oh how I love this modern day Sonnet of yours dear Sami.
What a great choice to write about, especially now as things in our world are upside down.
Thank you for sharing...
Loved every word,
Lisa

[Sami Khalil]

Wow! So true and well said about all of that. I found it fitting to inspire as I'm inspired by her and to give people hope. I'm so honored you have visited and shared.
As for the painting, I know you are a wonderful artist as Ken. See you soon.

[Patricia Wedel]

dear Sami… Our Lady Liberty… She stands for all the Freedoms we share. Your Shakespearean Sonnet has touched the pages of our History. I want to get my Feathered Pen and copy each Word on aParchment. You are an Artist of words. gently, Pat

[Sami Khalil]

Wow! An honor coming from you talented lady. You represent her , too. We all do. Thank you kindly for sharing your thoughts and experiences.

[John the Baptist]

Very nice Shakespearean sonnet here. The last two lines were especially moving.

[Sami Khalil]

Howdy do! So true and well said dear poet and friend. Glad it moved you. Thank you kindly for the visit and sharing your thoughts. See you soon.

[Lydia Shutter]

A moving tribute to the Statue of Liberty and all she stands for. Well written, Sami. Have to admit, though, I had to enlarge the print to read it! Lydi**

[Sami Khalil]

Ok. I will check into that. Thank you for the awesome review and letting me know. Have a great weekend

[Sami Khalil]

Got it fixed. Thank you kindly.

[Lydia Shutter]

That is MUCH better!

[Sami Khalil]

::::: ))))))))))

[Chris Shaw]

She represents freedom and long may she do so. Certainly there are many who would like to see the end of democracy. There have been many who have sacrificed their lives fighting for it and we owe them so much. So well penned is your sonnet Sami. It is always such a pleasure to read your work.

Chris

[Sami Khalil]

Wowzy woooo! I love your take on this sonnet and your visit. I studied the British English in Lebanon before moving to the States and acquiring my citizenship. Shakespeare was a favourite among many others. I'm using the modern slant. Thank you kindly for all.

[Chris Shaw]

So pleased you had the opportunity to study Shakespeare and he is a favourite of yours. I have been lucky enough to go to the new Shakespeare theatre in Stratford on Avon and see performances there. Very memorable.

[Sami Khalil]

On the bucket list. Hopefully one day. Take care.

[Sami Khalil]

Note: You can count the syllables if you like. I also chose the Volta to be at the end...

[Carlos Lorenzo Estrada]

A joy to read from the many poets I admire here at the Cafe. When I was young I often wondered why the statue of liberty was female, as well as Lady justice. Than I began to live in a world where men would war and hate. Our greater virtues represent our greater aspirations and love. Qualities that define a creators intentions toward their children. Only a creator of life can truly understand these virtues of a greater love. Because they carry within them the seed of hope.

[Sami Khalil]

Wow! I totally agree with your wonderful review and truthful words. Thank you so much sir Carlos for sharing your heart and thoughts with us.

[Sami Khalil]

Glad to see you still around...