Wedding Gift

Wedding Gift

A Poem by Haruki

for Adam and Molly


Musical fragrance

Drifting through the tree top boughs

Clinging to starlight

© 2008 Haruki

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It's really a great wedding gift.
Thanks for sharing.

Posted 7 Years Ago

This is ear candy, pure and simple.

Posted 12 Years Ago

That's so cute. Short, sweet, elegant...leaves you wanting more! :) I love love, don't you!
Check ouy my stuff too!
Happy Writing!

Posted 12 Years Ago

This is so wonderful, it's soft and gentle.

Posted 12 Years Ago

Beautiful subtlety. Exquisite nuance.

Haiku as lovely and delicate and unique as a snowflake.

Truly the essence of the miracle of the living moment.

This poem is a treasured soul caress.

Posted 12 Years Ago

1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

lovely poem, a breaching limerick in haiku syllable,
the soft imagery magical and has a way of transporting the reader,
beautifully done.

Posted 12 Years Ago

2 of 2 people found this review constructive.

What a way to describe marriage... two souls reaching into the unknown together. Love it.

Posted 12 Years Ago

2 of 2 people found this review constructive.

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7 Reviews
Shelved in 2 Libraries
Added on September 10, 2008
Last Updated on September 11, 2008



Green Bay, WI

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