Warrior

unraveling the inner strength that lies in all of us

Invariably and indifferently,

We all are gifted by God

Something that is mostly hidden,

Something that needs to be awakened…

As hard as rock,

As high as mountain,

And as mighty as waterfall!

We all have it in us…

It bestows strength when needed!

It helps taking stands;

It’s that powerful one,

That defines who we are…

Yes, it’s a warrior in us!

Invariably, all of us have one.

That is why we fight for our cause;

That is one who strengthens our hearts…

Awaken the warrior to help the needy;

Awaken the one to enlighten lives!

Awaken it to define lives;

For life once lost cannot be regained…

Reviews

[Imperfection2aT]

This is really amazing. You've really touched on something here; by using that last stanza to envoke a response, the poem has taken on new meaning. Great job!

[Emily]

I love it!
I love the beginning.
Keep it up!!

[Caitlin Washnock]

I love how you describe strength in here. Really great job on this work. And good luck on the contest.

[Adler_Thomas]

Very nice! You are a great writer with a great message.

[sansrity sinha]

thanks a lot for appreciation!!

[Krizito]

Why fear the dark when you have the light to extinguish it sleeping within you".. You're a really great writer adorned with great messages, kudossss...

[sansrity sinha]

thank you so much! we are stronger than what we really think. and that strength should be deciphered i feel

[Krizito]

#bulls-eye

[CA Anurag Sharma]

"Awaken the warrior to help the needy;
Awaken the one to enlighten lives!
Awaken it to define lives;
For life once lost cannot be regained…"

So beautifully presented message in this....quite inspiring too....yah you are very right about us helping others in need ....good one...

[sansrity sinha]

thank you so much! i strongly believe that people are stronger than what they feel they are and the strength is useless if not used constructively!