Thinking Beyond The Thoughts.....

a set of almost unanswerable questions....

I don't know, why,
at some phases of life,
we have to deeply, cry..??

I don't know, why,
people see everything,
except, what is right...??

I don't know, why,
we humans also,
cant fly in the sky..??

I don't know, why,
the mountains are high,
the rivers deep,
and the sky, so bright..??

I don't know, whats,
in the holy places,
which, gives us,
eternal peace....!

I don't know, whats,
the magic, in music,
which makes, the listeners,
literally, enthusiastic...??

I don't know, whats,
so great, in books,
which makes the readers,
deeply, optimistic..??

I don't know, whats,
so sweet, about smile,
which even, makes the others smile..??

I don't know, whats,
so deep,in pain,
that, no one wants,
to bear it again....???

I don't know, whats,
that makes sun shine,
the fountains flow,
and the nature,
perfectly, fine....??

The answer, i guess,
is the same, every time, that,
"GOD, our heavenly father,
made this earth ,so fine,
so that, here, on this universe,
the glory of humanity shines....
therefore, we are to these things, destined,
so that, our joys, and glory,
never outshines...."!!!!!!

so,thank you God,
for the world,so fine,
and, for this majestic gift,
to we mankind....!!

Author's Note

hope, you would love to read this......
pleeeeeeaseeeeeeeee do read, rate, review ..!!!

Reviews

[Ravyne Hawke]

A lovely poem that allows the reader to ponder and question along with the writer. The color change distracts instead of adds to the poem.. punctuation all over the place again.. and you just need one question mark to make your point. I think you would be better off not using punctuation until you learn the rules of usage.. just a suggestion.

[CBH]

This reminds me of 'I don't know why she swallowed the fly, she'll probably die' but in a much better and more sincere way:)

[Saumya]

thank you..!! :)

[Coyote Poetry]

Your word are true. We need to be thankful the beauty of life. We were given gifts and need to thank God for the gift of opportunity to accomplish something worthwhile. Thank you for the outstanding poem.
Coyote

[Saumya]

thank you so much for the lovely review...!!!

[annie lee]

This is lovely. The repetition keeps the flow strong, and the ending is triumphant. Very joyful.

[Saumya]

thank you...!!

[Jack...]

Very beautiful and full of life's queations with one great answer. Nice.

[Saumya]

thank you for the review....!!!

[Lily Finch]

beautifully written but (want to share you something god can't be a father )

[Saumya]

thank you for the review..!!:)
i used God, to be father here,because, i wrote it with respect to a daughter....
hope, you got your answer..!!
take care....
saumya

[AdorableDreams]

Woow I loveeee it! It has strong metaphors!

[Saumya]

thank you for the lovely review..!! :)

[AdorableDreams]

No problem;)

[Ency Bearis]

wonderful visionary thoughts that you need a logical answer within this world,
great theme to write about and you had written well

[Saumya]

thank you so much, sir..!! :)

[Akshat♥]

Your poem is so beautiful :)
You have asked so many good questions here...
and the answer is just perfect :)
Nothing is easy in this world..
You have to give your best with an optimistic way :)
You write from your heart that's why you connect readers really well!!
KEEp writing!! :)

[Saumya]

thank you for the lovely review...!! :)

[Akshat♥]

you are welcome dear :)