Thinking Beyond The Thoughts.....

a set of almost unanswerable questions....

I don't know, why,
at some phases of life,
we have to deeply, cry..??

I don't know, why,
people see everything,
except, what is right...??

I don't know, why,
we humans also,
cant fly in the sky..??

I don't know, why,
the mountains are high,
the rivers deep,
and the sky, so bright..??

I don't know, whats,
in the holy places,
which, gives us,
eternal peace....!

I don't know, whats,
the magic, in music,
which makes, the listeners,
literally, enthusiastic...??

I don't know, whats,
so great, in books,
which makes the readers,
deeply, optimistic..??

I don't know, whats,
so sweet, about smile,
which even, makes the others smile..??

I don't know, whats,
so deep,in pain,
that, no one wants,
to bear it again....???

I don't know, whats,
that makes sun shine,
the fountains flow,
and the nature,
perfectly, fine....??

The answer, i guess,
is the same, every time, that,
"GOD, our heavenly father,
made this earth ,so fine,
so that, here, on this universe,
the glory of humanity shines....
therefore, we are to these things, destined,
so that, our joys, and glory,
never outshines...."!!!!!!

so,thank you God,
for the world,so fine,
and, for this majestic gift,
to we mankind....!!

Author's Note

hope, you would love to read this......
pleeeeeeaseeeeeeeee do read, rate, review ..!!!

Reviews

[Ravyne Hawke]

A lovely poem that allows the reader to ponder and question along with the writer. The color change distracts instead of adds to the poem.. punctuation all over the place again.. and you just need one question mark to make your point. I think you would be better off not using punctuation until you learn the rules of usage.. just a suggestion.

[Rahul]

IInd last phrase got some colorsssss...lol...nicely penned, words're nice and powerful, it's too long write but it's nice reading. Every thing's a fun and long write could be fun..neah...(confused now...lol)
great job :) 100/100

[Nix]

I definitely wasn't expecting the end. I absolutely loved the second to last stanza. It was exceptionally well written and very powerful. The repetition was well placed and drove the point home. Another great write.

[quinfinn]

i think you are referring to the triumph of the human spirit here. and you express it quite nicely. another stellar write!

[Baby Ricochet]

The Sacrodic paradox:I know enough to know I know nothing.

[Saumya]

:)
yes almost..!!!
thank you for the review..!!
:)

[Kristin Lee]

Oh the questions of the life, and the very important gratitude we give. Very nice write. Very sincere and from the heart.

[Saumya]

thank you soo much...!!
:)

[Rita L. Sev]

Very nice sentiments and strong faith shown here. The punctuation was a bit distracting, and not needed - I think the poem would flow better without it. Otherwise, a good and sincere write.

[Saumya]

thank you so much, for your valuable review..!! :)

[crazer]

Thank for reminding me how gracious my heavenly Father truly is. We created beings should constantly remind ourselves that we came from him, therefore we cannot know everything, for we are not God.
What a joyful reminder to be humble and grateful toward him. crazer

[Saumya]

thank you so much,for the review..!!

[She With Eyes Like Unsh..]

I thank God I have found another Christian writer! Keep up the good work!

[Saumya]

thank you so much for the lovely review...!!

[annie lee]

Rereading this poem is a tonic. Your faith is expressed beautifully.

[Saumya]

thank you soooooooo much...!!!!
:)