When You Are a Beginner

all those thoughts which arise in our mind being a beginner...

When you are a beginner,

nothing around 

seems easier...

It feels like

this world is a big sphere

and we,

simply a tiny creature.

When you are a beginner,

you are filled with endless vigor...

that something

which is highest,

when compared to any

other level..

When you are a beginner,

everything around

seems like

a wonderful element,

of an interesting picture..

Everyone around,

like the best teacher,

and every situation,

deliberately trying

to teach something newer...

When you are a beginner,

you are completely

at a different level,

knowing nothing, but still

fighting with everything

difficult..

and hoping for something better...

But being a beginner

is interesting 

in its own sphere,

as here

we cant even wonder,

whether the next moment

would be sunshine,

or a huge thunder..

So whatever you are today,

a beginner or older,

you need to have hope in all spheres,

for life always teaches you

something newer..

and day by day

tries to make you better.

and then, we can never wonder,

what this once called a "beginner",

would turn out to be after some time,

or years...

Author's Note

i hope you all enjoyed reading it..
i'll be really glad to see your reviews and please rate it:)
many thanks
saumya:)

Reviews

[Mittens]

You have a very positive outcome for someone as a beginner; please don't ever lose that. A lot of people find beginning something to be a frightening experience or they're self conscious about it because they don't want to be seen as a beginner. A poem like this goes a long way to instilling the a bit of reinforcement that beginning should be view as a positive experience, that learning something should be fun and enlightening.

Thanks again for the read request; great work as usual, Saumya.

[Saumya]

thank you soo much Matt:) glad you enjoyed it:)

[Ngai]

You truly are brilliant. Comcept is out of this world. Me I enjoyed reading this!!

[Rosaria_V]

Humble beginnings are always great!! Especially when you look back your not looking back, your only looking to see just how far you've come

[Mark]

Very nice. First stanza. 'Simply a tiny creature' should be plural since you used we as the subject.

[Leslie Philibert]

Like this too, when you start to write..there is no end..we all must begin.

[Catlen]

Nice Work! Thanks for sharing.

[Dayran]

I don't think anyone forgets where it all began for them ... and in remembering that we realize where we have come to. Nice.

[Great Aunt Astri]

A lovely idea of a poem. I like the repetition of 'When you are a beginner,' I almost makes it into a song.

[Morgan Storms]

I Like being the beginner! But I also like being experienced! I love when I began working....HAHA! now I just work! :) Nice job.

[Jvl narasimharao]

I am a beginner and I do want to be a beginner.You have great inoivative ideas.

[MsJewel]

Your poem is wonderfully uplifting and inspirational. We were all beginners at one time, and perhaps many of us still are, but regardless a beginner or older, as you so eloquently put it "we need to have hope in all spheres." What wonderful advice.

:) Julie