When You Are a Beginner

all those thoughts which arise in our mind being a beginner...

When you are a beginner,

nothing around 

seems easier...

It feels like

this world is a big sphere

and we,

simply a tiny creature.

When you are a beginner,

you are filled with endless vigor...

that something

which is highest,

when compared to any

other level..

When you are a beginner,

everything around

seems like

a wonderful element,

of an interesting picture..

Everyone around,

like the best teacher,

and every situation,

deliberately trying

to teach something newer...

When you are a beginner,

you are completely

at a different level,

knowing nothing, but still

fighting with everything

difficult..

and hoping for something better...

But being a beginner

is interesting 

in its own sphere,

as here

we cant even wonder,

whether the next moment

would be sunshine,

or a huge thunder..

So whatever you are today,

a beginner or older,

you need to have hope in all spheres,

for life always teaches you

something newer..

and day by day

tries to make you better.

and then, we can never wonder,

what this once called a "beginner",

would turn out to be after some time,

or years...

Author's Note

i hope you all enjoyed reading it..
i'll be really glad to see your reviews and please rate it:)
many thanks
saumya:)

Reviews

[Mittens]

You have a very positive outcome for someone as a beginner; please don't ever lose that. A lot of people find beginning something to be a frightening experience or they're self conscious about it because they don't want to be seen as a beginner. A poem like this goes a long way to instilling the a bit of reinforcement that beginning should be view as a positive experience, that learning something should be fun and enlightening.

Thanks again for the read request; great work as usual, Saumya.

[Saumya]

thank you soo much Matt:) glad you enjoyed it:)

[Su' Nacnetaf]

"... a wonderful element, of an interesting picture" this was definitively my favorite line. Thanks for sharing, it's very nice to find writers like you, I can't quite say what the style may be, but it is poignant, reflexive, and for some reason hopeful. I hope you're doing quite well, cheers.

[ANTO]

Saumya - your enthusiasm for learning abounds in this piece. Its almost infectious! There is so much in this poem that is good - positivity, philosophy, life-skills. I loved the way that you are not just pro-beginner - you see both sides.
Good writing.

[Saumya]

thank you so much Anto:) m happy, u liked the write, and glad that you could see so much in it!

[jacob erin-cilberto]

i feel that faith and hope are really important, but they are much easier to have when we are beginners....once we grow up, experience pain, learn life's lessons it is easy to get cynical---
and lose that naivity we once had...
the eyes have seen too much...

but even when older there can still be hope and adventure.

good piece...

[Saumya]

thanx Jacob:)

[Surya pradha]

very relatable poem. we all face difficulties as novices. i appreciate the fact that you conveyed a real life situation. well done.

[Saumya]

thank you:)

[Me]

you are the picture of poetic perfection with these peaceful and flowing words

[Saumya]

thank you Michael:)

[New Theory]

It was a really wonderful poem. To aspire high, the excitement and vigor should be present of a beginner always. Good work, keep it up.

Please can you review some of my work. It would be really helpful.

[gabrielle]

We all start from the bottom before we could reach the top. A piece so full of wisdom.

[❤ Maggie ❤..]

I really loved this poem! I liked the first verse, "When you are a beginner, nothing around seems easier...It feels like this world is a big sphere and we, simply a tiny creature.." And it's so true!!! When you go through, well anything, for the first time there's just so much pressure, joy, all different emotions mixed in there. It's when you get older that you start to realize whether a situation is worth it or not. Great write! :)

[Phillitup]

The concept...so...interesting. Tell me, where did you get the inspiration for this? Beginners become frustrated, curious. They seek forever to learn and if not they seek forever to be viewed as a professional. I'm guilty of the latter. I always say that I knew something I didn't, strive to appear calm and confident. Being a beginner allows you to either lie to yourself or become one of the wisest people ever. Thank you for opening my eyes, and helping me be true to myself.

-Dell