When You Are a Beginner

all those thoughts which arise in our mind being a beginner...

When you are a beginner,

nothing around 

seems easier...

It feels like

this world is a big sphere

and we,

simply a tiny creature.

When you are a beginner,

you are filled with endless vigor...

that something

which is highest,

when compared to any

other level..

When you are a beginner,

everything around

seems like

a wonderful element,

of an interesting picture..

Everyone around,

like the best teacher,

and every situation,

deliberately trying

to teach something newer...

When you are a beginner,

you are completely

at a different level,

knowing nothing, but still

fighting with everything

difficult..

and hoping for something better...

But being a beginner

is interesting 

in its own sphere,

as here

we cant even wonder,

whether the next moment

would be sunshine,

or a huge thunder..

So whatever you are today,

a beginner or older,

you need to have hope in all spheres,

for life always teaches you

something newer..

and day by day

tries to make you better.

and then, we can never wonder,

what this once called a "beginner",

would turn out to be after some time,

or years...

Author's Note

i hope you all enjoyed reading it..
i'll be really glad to see your reviews and please rate it:)
many thanks
saumya:)

Reviews

[Mittens]

You have a very positive outcome for someone as a beginner; please don't ever lose that. A lot of people find beginning something to be a frightening experience or they're self conscious about it because they don't want to be seen as a beginner. A poem like this goes a long way to instilling the a bit of reinforcement that beginning should be view as a positive experience, that learning something should be fun and enlightening.

Thanks again for the read request; great work as usual, Saumya.

[Saumya]

thank you soo much Matt:) glad you enjoyed it:)

[Leigh]

A very good description of that feeling and situation, being a beginner is an exciting time also

[Astro]

Interesting insights Saumya, to be a 'beginner' does present problems, but also can be exciting because everything is new and each new thing brings that 'sphere' a little closer into view. Watch out for pronouns and plurals like this one.
"and we,
simply a tiny creature."

If you say 'we' then it is plural, and you would have to say "simply tiny creature(s)"

[Katseye]

Very strong. Maybe a few places where wording is strange, but it works well.

[Jeff]

Wonderful and wise poem. Great work!

[CBH]

I finally can review again! My computer had some kind of virus, so part of my account was disabled. Your poem is lovely, and it really emphasizes the truth of just starting out. Great work!

[emmajoy]

Wise and wonderful words. Every turn into something new is an adventure, plus a lesson into finding self. Such wonderful thoughts, Saumya.

[Saumya]

thanx dear for this lovely review:) glad you liked it:)

[Muse]

There's a lot of wisdom that you share here. Well done sweetie.

[Eddie Phillips]

Everything has a beginning. We learn from our yesterdays. Wonderful thought in this poem Saumya. it was wonderfully penned.

[Saumya]

thanx Eddie:) glad you enjoyed this write:)

[annie lee]

Your faith certainly makes views like yours believable. I am much older, much more cynical about the value of my fellow man and his aspirations. Witness the fact that I have 48 read requests and hardly anybody ever visits my pages. It is harder to have much hope as we age because our capabilities diminish, our voices are ignored and we are swept aside as unimportant. Social Security reduces your income to a pittance, and venal politicians try to use our age group as an influence point. You can see hope shining from the faces of most young people; I suffer pangs of bittersweet feeling when I see them. I remember wanting to make a difference in the world, oh yes, I do. Now when I look back over the debris-strewn path I took, there are things like my daughter and family that I treasure, but also so much I regret, am repulsed by and bored by so much. It's life. It has a beginning, and if you are fortunate to take the right steps, find the right path, follow the right advice and listen to your own heart, you'll be ok. Sadly, the time when many of us finally understand those steps, we are too old to take them.