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Clay Pigeon

Clay Pigeon

A Poem by Placid Stranger
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Trying to make sense of a life, and after.

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Persistently crackling radio waves

Silence is golden just isn't the case


First begin by saying your prayers

Please mean it now without my tears


Lay me down to sleep I go

My All In All, please take her soul


Our feasts for Him will always be done

Yours we know has just begun


From planets beyond with three bright stars

Maybe one winked I see from afar


What are clay pigeons feathers made of?

A flightless bird sings songs from above


You'll grow your wings, I know it to be

A story with an end is too selfish for me

© 2014 Placid Stranger


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One lie sort of caught my attention when I stumbled over it, not quite sure if you meant to writer like it is written.
"Maybe one winked I think I saw"
It also didn't rhyme with the line above (and I picked up a rhyming pattern from the other stanzas). Other then that, this was a gorgeously written poem! It was touching, loving, and inspired a bit of questioning on my part. I can't wait to read more of your work!

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1 of 1 people found this review constructive.




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One lie sort of caught my attention when I stumbled over it, not quite sure if you meant to writer like it is written.
"Maybe one winked I think I saw"
It also didn't rhyme with the line above (and I picked up a rhyming pattern from the other stanzas). Other then that, this was a gorgeously written poem! It was touching, loving, and inspired a bit of questioning on my part. I can't wait to read more of your work!

This review was written for a previous version of this writing

Posted 12 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.


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Placid Stranger
Placid Stranger

Chicago, IL



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About to graduate from college with a degree in Economics and Business Management. The three things I love most in life are music, sports, and Econ. I'm not a serious writer and really don't know anyt.. more..

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