SHE!

SHE

Hides under the bed 

mending her wounds

Fears her own shadow on the walls

hiding under the covers

Never smiles at her teddy bear

sitting on her pillow

Wants to be held

but cries alone 

Can hear him calling

smiling at the soft seductive voice

Is hopeful 

waiting for him to take her

Wants the bleeding to stop

for him to hold out his hand

Asks to be taken away

some where free 

Wants away from the dark 

pleading with him

Stands alone

waiting for her angel 

Looks out the window

into the dark

Sees no light 

for there is none, never will be

Crawls deeper 

into her hole of hell 

Cries out at the pain

crushing her own heart

Dies before he comes

as he stands over her lifeless body

Couldn't wait any longer

he cries red tears, spreading his white wings encasing them together

Smiles at him

eyes never to open, heart to never heal...for he waited too long to come....

Reviews

[Aven]

I don't know which I like better, this or HE... having read them both and seen how they contribute to eachother, I am starting to think they are inseperable. very good write. :)

[RTB]

man i just read he that was intense they both are cool points of view of the same story and it was a wonderful read

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that is heart wrenching..really well put together the short stanza really give it a punch

[deeps]

This is so powerful and emotional.

[Dark Empress]

Aw, this makes me cry. Good poem

[TAO]

...don't tell anybody...but I'm...tearing up... I'll deny it if you mention it and go out and paint the town red just to prove my manhood >:( All in all...stark...and still of beauty. Tragic, Ms.

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. wow ... very powerful and horrific ... yet written brilliantly ... for some reason ... reminds me of the song "concrete angel" ...