the devil's in the details

when i met the devil,

i didn't know it was him. 

he was very handsome,

with a wicked smile,

and we became friends.

quickly we became lovers.

it was only after his hands 

had raked themselves over my body,

did i know that he 

had come from hell.

Author's Note

be honest, tell me what you think.

Reviews

[Roshan Nair]

A seductive stranger to a dangerous love.. the way you've summed up the journey is brief and beautiful yet uncompromising on the sentiment in each stage
Good work :)

[ANTO]

Wow - this has 'Fifty shades of Hades' written all over it (thats copyrighted as of now by the way - joking !!)
To feel that one has had the devil visit and even worse one has had relations with the prince of darkness must be deeply disturbing - even if was in the guise of a handsome guy. We live and learn as they say AH. Thanks for sharing