again

So maybe I love you and I don’t admit it

Maybe I need you in my life

What if I write to you just for you to answer

Couse I didn't know you long enough

And now you won't be back till summer

How can I wait for this long

Now I found you, you re diapered

Guess I just have to wait again

I was writing just for fun

But now I guess that you are the one

Won't promise that when you come back I'll tell you

Maybe I never want you to change

So baby I love you and I won't admit it

For you showed me how to love again

Reviews

[Patrick Henry]

It didn't hit me in the colon and bladder like your featured review lets on about, but I like it. This poem kinda reminds me of what it looks like when you get a hand-written love letter, and you "read between the lines"!! The first two lines and last two lines are very well written and placed in their rightful spots, with this arcing crescendo from beginning to end. I like it. Beautiful Cara. xoxo -Mark

[Cara]

thank you mark glad you liked it

[Cara]

thank you mark
glad you like it :D

[Patrick Henry]

*a gentle and friendly kiss upon your cheek* That was a stellar write, Cara. A beautiful example of how gorgeous a precious few words can be when written with the right heart, just the right way!! Maybe it is the holiday season that has this transparent rainbow coursing through my brain when reading certain poems lately, but that first line and the second to the last line.... I have heard said to me in the most horrible of circumstances "emotionally, with my sister, friends, and family dying", and in the best of them..... they TOO have passed, and this poem of yours....lol...... this POEM of yours accidentally brings all good and some of the ugly to the surface, and it doesn't frighten anymore. A poem!! : ) One freakin' poem!! A year ago, I would have read this and might have missed the message..... READ it, but not HEAR it. I'm glad YOU are glad I like it. : ) You are beautiful for writing this. Don't erase it!! xoxo -Your Mark

[Cara]

omg mark, im soo sorry for your lost
Tears are about to come out of my easy right now
Tow minutes ago this poem was to a great friend that I loved
Now I am honored to present this poem to you
Hoping you except it
xoxo cara

[InsanityWriter]

The ending was great. :) Well done!

[Cara]

thank you ^-^

[Imagine Blade]

Aaawwww.....

That was beautiful. Really touching.

I love the 1st line: "Maybe I love you and I don't admit it."
It really hits my liver, pancreas, colon and bladder so much.
I know that feeling of how much you love a person but you can't help but deny it. I love how it tells a story with just a few lines. It's quite a blessed feeling to read this.

I love this so much that I gave it a 100 and I put it on my fave list.

THANKS!!!

Here, a lot of hearts for you. HAHAHA!

[Cara]

thank you :3
i do hate that feeling, it makes me feel like you are waiting sooo long but for nothing.
thank you again

[Ana Drake]

Very cute :)
Actually, it seems like a good idea for a story as-well...

[Cara]

thank you

[Faith Elizabeth]

I really liked it :)

[Cara]

thank you

[Persona]

I love that first line - it grabbed me instantly. The font is nice too and you use aphorism well to basically say that you have felt love and that they are away which I think is great as a quick storyline to a poem. I wanted to read the whole way though, unlike some things, so that's always a plus!

[Cara]

thank you

[Salar Majak]

:) sometimes alot of things in life need waiting for, you are shedding the light on this matter, i love how it flowed, well done sis

[Cara]

thank you

[Sid]

A deep honest read that longing for the one you love is appealing...good write!!

[Cara]

thank you

[WingsToFly]

i think it's 'you're disappeared',right? Nice one.

[Cara]

ohh, sorry about that, well it is " you disappeared"
thanks

[quinfinn]

i think this goes a lot deeper than most would realize upon first look, it has elements of waiting forever till someone has grown old and it also speaks of love and youth and never wanting to change....complex, but amazing. i like it.

[Cara]

thank you