Pouring Ink~

Pouring Ink~

A Poem by NoneOfYourBusiness akaKITTY KUTABAREakaCandyPole

He pours Braille into my cup

his story roams my taste buds

I sample his prose de jour on the inside of my cheeks

little pebbles of exotic spice

bursting open

I swallow metaphors in amber casings

nectar on the underbelly of a rose

a little note of edible wafer

opens

a garden between my ribs;

the violin purrs under my palm

printing music into the nimble joints of my fingers

He paints Braille the length of my spine

a double helix

music

I am a living Haiga

a sensate geisha

an ornate teapot in my hand

I pour my Braille into his teacup

our fingers brush

generating

a new language

 

 

copyright:2010vssmd/mausemusepress

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© 2010 NoneOfYourBusiness akaKITTY KUTABAREakaCandyPole


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This makes me think of a poem entitled, "Braille," by John Lee Clark:

"The world rests on my lap.
If my finger is the sky,
Then under it the fields prosper.
Row after perfect row of buds
Bid me gather all I can.
The harvest is food for thought."

He was born deaf and lost his sight when he was an adolescent.

It's extraordinary to think of how those who have sight go through life blind to all the beauty around them. Thankfully, you are not one of those individuals. You have the gift of making all things beautiful.

Linda Marie



Posted 13 Years Ago


6 of 6 people found this review constructive.




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nice i like the last line
"our fingers brush
generating
a new language"...so much meaning in one line

Posted 13 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

This makes me think of a poem entitled, "Braille," by John Lee Clark:

"The world rests on my lap.
If my finger is the sky,
Then under it the fields prosper.
Row after perfect row of buds
Bid me gather all I can.
The harvest is food for thought."

He was born deaf and lost his sight when he was an adolescent.

It's extraordinary to think of how those who have sight go through life blind to all the beauty around them. Thankfully, you are not one of those individuals. You have the gift of making all things beautiful.

Linda Marie



Posted 13 Years Ago


6 of 6 people found this review constructive.

you create such beauty!! :) such amazing poetry.. from beginning to end.

Posted 13 Years Ago


Very creative and beautiful!! I wish I could write like you, you write so beautifully.

Posted 13 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Brilliant and creative....your intelligence is shown in your work.

Posted 13 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

The sweet melding of creativity, as one touches and influences another, is painted here in sweet appreciation of the small things in life, how enjoyable those moments are to savor. And then to reciprocate the gift, the ebb and flow of artistic minds in unity, both together yet apart... this is delicious, as is everything you serve us here at the cafe...

Posted 13 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

I LOVE THE DETAIL YOU PUT INTO YOUR WRITTING...
VERY AMAZING JOB...

Posted 13 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

vividly written~you have given my soul breath, thank you

Posted 13 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

very good

Posted 13 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Incredible edible and delicious...
my palms are sweaty...Rapture!

Posted 13 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.


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Tags: poetry, senesence, union, music inside, sensate fluidity, victoriaselene skye deme, pause, breathe

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