This Composite~

I have a mind

feed it

I have a heart

leave it

I have a soul

seam it

I have blood

redeem it

 

I have eyes

see me

I have lips

creamy

I have hips

dreamy

I have you

easy

 

I have wrists

bind them

I have pearls

find them

I have bones

grind them

I have thighs

ride them

 

I have words

taste them

I have my throat

lace them

I have love

wasp-waisted

I have bite

baited

 

I have him

undo me

I have her

sweat through me

I have them

to move me

I have me

to cool me

 

I have a beat    

pound with it

I have a kiss

drown in it

I have a need

bound with it

I have a sin

ground in it

 

I have soul

pour through me

I have man

undo me

I have sea  

to sooth me

I have earth

redo me

 

 

 

 

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Reviews

[Michael X]

wow. breathtaking and erotic, dreamy, sensuous landscapes, and the words are
the trees blowing in the whispers you render with such beautiul sense of
poetic wisdom, this poem floats through the heart the way a cool breeze
soothe the skin on a warm summer day Selene, blissful and desirous perfumes

[Ruth]

Complete restruction1
Full circle
Bended
Broken
AWESOME! LOL
xx

[Citizen Erased]

Great poem, it flows very nicely! :)

[Jibey]

Cleverly composed... I liked the short pithy lines and the repetition, like a spell, enchanting the reader with its blend of soul and body given in love and delight... and the sense of connexion with the primal elements of life...

[Pax Analog]

Sexed-up Buddhic deconstruction.

Well, "I" is a koan, but when the strip tease runs out of composite veils, there remains Infinity.

"I have a beat/pound with it/I have a kiss/drown in it/I have a need/bound with it/I have a sin/ground in it"

That stanza emphasizes the sleek rock lyric nature of this smokin' piece. Let me know if you want a song version of this. I'm all over it w/slashing guitar and growling vocals. . .

Thrill-killer siren Zen song.

This is just soo wonderful! It makes you smile as you read it all the way! :) Thanx for the read request! The lines in this poem are written so nicely and flowlingly! Very great!!

[KaySea]

very nice. great job

[Maurice]

Great poem. Flows very nicely.

[Kesha]

Wow what a beautiful poem! A great write and a wonderful read! I love it! :)

[Liza]

wow; this was sexy
a confident woman
that knows what she has
and knows what she wants
so smooth
so talented

[luciddreamer]

What a beautiful picture you write....:)
Peace
Robin