A Teaspoon Of Sugar . . . .

~a shortee sugar spin~

Mornings become a little less

cumbersome

over coffee

with you

poise of your magician’s hands

poised in a stream of sunshine

cascading cream

from the engraved crystal of my palms

burrs stuck to my soul

falling to the ground

opening seeds

as you pass the sugar

dusting off my spirit

with those poised hands

tapering corporeal gaps

my threads

playing with your threads

above

a sugar bowl

 

 

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Reviews

[Michael X]

wow, i loved this poem, smooth and excellent work, as in professional
poetry that exudes clarity and crystal refinement, imo.
smooth word art Selene, sensuously light flavors, sweet to
the imagination, the wording is so subte in grand romantic execution.

[Tate Morgan]

A dream played in melody

[Moonflower]

This is beautiful, magnifiying a simple moment into deliberate undertones of meaning, I enjoyed this mesmerizing write. Thanks, dear.

[Jas Alejandrino Ramos]

so romantic....in every words written in this poem about that person is incomparable that make the subject really interesting

[Lachenille Papillion]

Sounds like a beautiful moment shared between poetic friends.

[Omar Fendri]

ow wow ! so spoken Adoration! I like the way you control the words... You bring me right in that world that you created in "A Teaspoon Of Sugar"... It's sooo true adorable and sweet to read... I cherish it :)

[Crow]

Wonderful piece of literary art, I could almost smell the aroma of the coffee and see the condiments.

[Crinkle°]

a beautiful poem, selene.

[Maurice]

Lovely poem. A great way to start a day.

[deeps]

This is a wonderful write here, I enjoyed this.