A Teaspoon Of Sugar . . . .

~a shortee sugar spin~

Mornings become a little less

cumbersome

over coffee

with you

poise of your magician’s hands

poised in a stream of sunshine

cascading cream

from the engraved crystal of my palms

burrs stuck to my soul

falling to the ground

opening seeds

as you pass the sugar

dusting off my spirit

with those poised hands

tapering corporeal gaps

my threads

playing with your threads

above

a sugar bowl

 

 

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Reviews

[Michael X]

wow, i loved this poem, smooth and excellent work, as in professional
poetry that exudes clarity and crystal refinement, imo.
smooth word art Selene, sensuously light flavors, sweet to
the imagination, the wording is so subte in grand romantic execution.

[Ed Hart]

that's what you call taking your lumps and eating them too...so nice sharing them with you

[My Fair Lady]

Sexy and smart.

[JelliFyshKissUs]

Oooh la la. Never been a coffee fan...until now. One lump or two?

i'll need more than one teaspoon, but i'd tangle threads with you over coffee any day.

[Robin]

I have eclairs

[Hello, Goodbye]

You make the most simple of ideas seem complex.. and I love reading every word of it. I cant stop the imagery that you express.. seriously I cant.. haha

[paul]

wow. devinely beautiful