Ripper~

He whimpers

simple predator on the prowl

to twist her

out of love with a spectacular

bespectacled owl

another male trick with a generic knife

stripping girl with half a shelf life

left

her scent

in the flare of his emasculated game

glare

snap her book of spines

in twain

she flails

a smeared smile

wanes

under his whip her

snap her

hands

and there, then

yes there!

under a night sky bleeding rain

she twists

the point he missed

her prey perfume

shedding its victim hue

in coils

she

unhinges

strikes a deadly pose

whispers in a hiss "Bring it"

he gapes

he's rearranged

she, a hiss "You've the dishonor of being my first,

accursed

of Lilith's rage."

parry

thrust

katana

a gun in her glove

head rolls without the usual sass

her ring a slice of brass

his blood with organic concrete

blended

welcome to the era

of this b***h named Vengeance

 

 

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Author's Note

~how much longer will humanity twiddle its diddle and molly coddle these f***ers who prey on children~another baby dead by the hands of a thing disguised as a man~ and he will get treatment because he is "sick"?~ no, humanity is sick for abiding these beasts amongst us~

Reviews

[Siddartha Beth Pierce]

KUDOS! This gave me chills for real! I can empathize with this...it also reminds me of the book and movie 'Perfume' where the protagonist makes perfume out of women - seems this is what this man is after here...truly brilliant poetry. A favorite always!
Light,
Siddartha

[editor]

but your poem does not make sense...you are comparing some sort of child thing to lilith...lililth is a jewish myth of a woman that would not abide a man? so how is that even related to child rape ?

[Celeste21]

Sometimes the most scariest events are not natural disasters. People that make me fearful are people that prey on innocent people for no reason. People who are sadistic. The sociopaths. When it involves children, I understand why I constantly strive to be around my little one at all times. People are capable of so much cruelty these days. All you can think is protect, protect, protect. I don't let strangers watch my child. I only let family, and that is pretty much only immediate. It is sad you cannot trust ANYONE these days. Oh, and excellent evocative portrayal.

[Robert Kahil]

I had to read it twice to get the whole flow and it is blatantly brutal. This society is sick. More people need to understand that. A major character of mine wipes monsters like this off the face of the planet. We need more heroes yes. Great poem and great message!

[gothicchica]

loooooooooooooooooooooooooooved it

[SpokenWord]

Our society will never find truth in balance or in justice. The innocent are punished harshly or unjustly and the guilty are treated with kid gloves as if they will shatter if we forced them to be responsible for action. Stirring write filled with emotions from within that cry out to all of us... it just isn't right

[The Rock And Roll Cowbo..]

Those who commit these despicable acts are not men... they are not even human... how can such monsters exist in this world... it is like a disease that spreads from generation to generation and there seems to be no cure or answer... a hard hitting poem that tells it like it is.

[Linear]

Hard hitting written verse, we do indeed live in an ailing society, it's decadence knows no bounds, yet we all share some blame dont we? we ignore the slow moral decay we see around us, saying "It's just life and providing it hurts no one it's all ok in this anything goes world" I cringe when I hear children cuss and adults laugh at the cuteness of it, I cringe at the now quite normal use of porn, well after all it's freedom of choice isn't it?........and then of course there is the use of violence portrayed on our screens daily, where the (Hero) gets his revenge in the most brutal fashion and we cheer, and so become to believe it's ok to take the law into our own hands.........I hear of young girls giving up their virginity at the age of ten or even younger, but thats ok if their in Love!!! and that is just a bad world a sick world, it makes you want to cry :O(

Sorry but your poem made me feel, things that I wish I did not have to feel, Great poem as usual.........Gosh I can go on cant I

[Art]

Exceptional work Selene...society has fallen into a pit of uncaring...not all of us but there are those who can't conciously see past the disgust of those individuals who prey on others...you wrote an excellent piece on this subject...

[Kerry O'Connor]

What a reversal of roles - you went all Tarentino on us at the end.
Loved it!