Ripper~

He whimpers

simple predator on the prowl

to twist her

out of love with a spectacular

bespectacled owl

another male trick with a generic knife

stripping girl with half a shelf life

left

her scent

in the flare of his emasculated game

glare

snap her book of spines

in twain

she flails

a smeared smile

wanes

under his whip her

snap her

hands

and there, then

yes there!

under a night sky bleeding rain

she twists

the point he missed

her prey perfume

shedding its victim hue

in coils

she

unhinges

strikes a deadly pose

whispers in a hiss "Bring it"

he gapes

he's rearranged

she, a hiss "You've the dishonor of being my first,

accursed

of Lilith's rage."

parry

thrust

katana

a gun in her glove

head rolls without the usual sass

her ring a slice of brass

his blood with organic concrete

blended

welcome to the era

of this b***h named Vengeance

 

 

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Author's Note

~how much longer will humanity twiddle its diddle and molly coddle these f***ers who prey on children~another baby dead by the hands of a thing disguised as a man~ and he will get treatment because he is "sick"?~ no, humanity is sick for abiding these beasts amongst us~

Reviews

[Siddartha Beth Pierce]

KUDOS! This gave me chills for real! I can empathize with this...it also reminds me of the book and movie 'Perfume' where the protagonist makes perfume out of women - seems this is what this man is after here...truly brilliant poetry. A favorite always!
Light,
Siddartha

[.]

Truly hit the nail on the head with this one..with a poetic flair you b***h slapped the hell out of the words to create a vivid clever and poignant poem...these people exist to show us who we are not..and will never be..

[Chloe..Across the Unive..]

Powerful Selene.. Vengeance at last, at least in your poem .
Strong words and cry for true vengeance for the monsters killing the
babies (and others) as if they are killing an ant .. just with no conscious
or regret.. cutem' up like meat as a butcher in a market- have a pork chop for dinner- so sick! and
Sickening the horrors of this world we live in ..
Makes me wonder ,
Will anyone get out a live?

[The Cougar's Den]

LOVED THE ENDING! Sometimes I'm never quite sure that I get all of your double/hidden meanings, but I sure enjoy reading your stuff, as it is always, always, ALWAYS beautiful!

In response to your Author's Note, I absolutely despise the ones that "blame it on a bad childhood." Mine wasn't rosy either but I've never killed anyone and I've never molested a child.

[Matthew Kult]

A poem after my own heart. Brilliantly written.

Matthew

[Bard Constantine]

If only...

[Jouni Sakari]

I read this tasting the tunes and tones , so funnily you write that it touch my bones , I am such an unexperienced guy , that some of the images are beyond my visualization capacity , but it doesn't matter , for I enjoy the surprises . . . thus , I read this over and over , and your note does not prevent me seeing something about 'my own beast inside' . . . let it abide !!!

[Brad]

the situation that inspired this is very sickening, the poem itself is grafted into my psyche as deadly venom pumping its way into my soul. *shivers*

[Reese38]

This is how rhyming is done! The message is powerful. Unique and very creative style.

[Well thank you]

emotional piece, dear me