Dizzy

Spinning, twirling, faster now.

See the sky touch the ground.

Playing on a merry-go-round.

This is life.

Ever moving.

Turnning, whirling

Spinning round

Never stopping

Till it all ends

You touch the ground

Reviews

[The Flawed]

Well done, this is quite good, but I feel like you could work on the ending a little more.
Good job

[NxSoulja]

i like how dis poem explains dat life waits 4 no1 [dats how i c it]

[A]

I really like this poem. Its short, sweet, and gets straight to the point! Great writing and poem! :)

[Andrew'sWonderland]

Very intriguing! This poem is definitely a bit darker, but just as good as your other work! Keep up the outstanding effort!!