Solitude

Solitude

A Poem by shallimarRose

 



Alone, the three of us

Just me myself and I

We watch the sun rise and set

We talk among-st ourselves

And I realize

Sometimes I

am all I need


Solitude!


bj smith 

aka shallimarRose

© 2013 shallimarRose


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shallimarRose
Feel free to comment/critique.. Thanks for reading.. shallimarRose

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And I realize
Sometimes I
am all I need-- these are great lines.

I love the feeling in this piece, the overall concept that is driving forward the idea that a person can actually rejoice in the feeling of solitude. Sometimes being alone with our own mind is the best thing for a person; we are able to truly understand ourselves in these moments. Beautifully done.

Posted 8 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

shallimarRose

8 Years Ago

Thank you and yes.. I just wish the other two people in my head would stop talking sometimes... lol .. read more



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This is so very true...you expressed it beautifully

Posted 8 Years Ago


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shallimarRose

8 Years Ago

Thank you for reading.. shallimarRose
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Sam
The final words. Reminds me of a true self love when you don't need the world because you already have it and it is you.

Posted 8 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

shallimarRose

8 Years Ago

thanks for reading. Rose
And I realize
Sometimes I
am all I need-- these are great lines.

I love the feeling in this piece, the overall concept that is driving forward the idea that a person can actually rejoice in the feeling of solitude. Sometimes being alone with our own mind is the best thing for a person; we are able to truly understand ourselves in these moments. Beautifully done.

Posted 8 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

shallimarRose

8 Years Ago

Thank you and yes.. I just wish the other two people in my head would stop talking sometimes... lol .. read more
A Lovely write...as usual! A message that I can most definitely relate to.

Posted 8 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

shallimarRose

8 Years Ago

Thank you once again Sharon.. xo
You are very prolific. I think you have mobile devices with you always, so you can write anytime, anywhere. Sad, when you wrote solitude?The only way you can get me on top of that large stone is when you promise you'd treat me to java frappucino at Starbucks.lol. No, i changed my mind. There appears to be a shark near your feet. Opps. yeah, it's a shark all right.

Posted 8 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

shallimarRose

8 Years Ago

No I was not sad when I wrote this.. Nor had I seen this picture.. I found this picture yesterday. .. read more
endo rush

8 Years Ago

those are not clouds. That's dry ice.lol
shallimarRose

8 Years Ago

hmmm... on y dinosaur of a desktop it looks like fog.. haze, clouds... shallimar
it is a huge realization for one to know from the depths that one is truly OK all by one's self. when me myself and i are all gone there is tranquility and quiet beyond the depths. your poem inspires me this morning. thanks!

E.

Posted 8 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

shallimarRose

8 Years Ago

Well I am glad you pulled something from this... Thank you again.. shallimarRose
This was so simple yet it was very powerful in its meaning. J'adore! We all have our stories to tell and we always have people that support us and are there for us (as we are constantly reminded) but sometimes the best remedy is solitude. -Ian

Posted 8 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

shallimarRose

8 Years Ago

Again I thank you my friend.. xo
This is a great piece:) Sometimes we fail to realize that we are truly all we need sometimes.

Posted 8 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

shallimarRose

8 Years Ago

xo Thanks Rainy.. Rose
This is me, I'm totally like this. I think I just need the time away from people more than most.

Posted 8 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

shallimarRose

8 Years Ago

Me too Trev.. Being alone with my thoughts is very important to me.. thanks for reading.. xo shallim.. read more

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shallimarRose

F W, WA



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I am a singer, writer, poet, dreamer, believer..... I am an unconventional poet who has been writing rhyme since the age of five. I enjoy all styles of poetry. I write by ear not syllable count .. more..

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