Mickey's Gift

Mickey wanted to gift minnie,
Thought of a cute little thing
But alas, he had no penny,
He sat there sad and weeping.

Mr. Donald gave his helping hand,
He sat there thinking hard,
But all his ideas were so bland,
Finally he took out a card.

They went to Pluto, the wise pup,
For he would give some hint,
Pluto winked and gave a cup,
Which had some cash and mint.

Mickey yelled and jumped in joy,
As the three went to shop,
There he found a cute toy,
which would jump and hop.

Chewing the mint in joy and gay,
They walked to Mickey’s house,
Daisy came across their way,
Who was Donald’s spouse!

Daisy joined her hubby’s team,
To help them wrap the toy,
then she adorned it with a lacy seam,
seeing this, minnie will really enjoy

Minnie entered her tidy room,
She was filled with awe,
She heard a voice say “boom”,
And laughed at what she saw.


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Aug 29, 2010

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Winner

Sep 3, 2010

• The Whatchamacolic Contest
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Reviews

[The Water Queen]

This was such a cute poem!!

[A.Lee]

A cute fun poem. Nice work.

[Tina Kline]

This is a very fun and tender poem. I really did enjoy it. It brought a smile to my face.

[emmajoy]

Your words always make a necklace of smiles .. this is no exception!

[Poetic Beauty]

I really like this fun and whimsical poem. It is great to read about our believed childhood characters. You did an amazing job on writing this poem. The character made me happy and smile.

[Fran Marie]

A most delightful write and enjoyable read
Well donE!

[Miss Coral]

Nice little piece.. the rhythm was a bit off for me in some places, but otherwise, great job. c:

-Coral-

[deeps]

This is wonderful and such a delightful read.