So much of this is beautiful, 'Filling with different shades ~ Carving perfectly into love’s passion…' and yes, very passionate and loving. Maybe the meter's out a little and could be corrected but, that doesn't detract from the emotion you've re-created with your words.
Interesting! I had never thought about expressing love through the ocean and the waves. You painted a marvelous portrait of love that two can feel for one another, it makes my heart "ripple" just thinking of it (:
What an awesome wave form this picture and the blue font, suits this piece just so wonderfully appropriate! There is a real power here, like the presented reaching wave and the feel of its breadth and glissening wonder, like holding a breath in its marvel. It is a majestic theme, you take to heart and share its energy with a purity.
A beautiful write Poets World, Write On / Right On!
Peace... Romon in Review.
So much of this is beautiful, 'Filling with different shades ~ Carving perfectly into love’s passion…' and yes, very passionate and loving. Maybe the meter's out a little and could be corrected but, that doesn't detract from the emotion you've re-created with your words.
To walk along the shore, leaving behind the footprints for the sea waves to tickle, the cool water washing your legs as you walk by, gentle breeze whiffing your cheek and mildly wavering .. more..