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He types away his sadness, 

Ignores his calls

Ignores his family.

She is gone,

They have said their long

Goodbyes, 

And now she is gone, 

So he types away, 

Click, click, click, Click

Back space,

Erase it, 

Pleas she says.

Hold the key down,

Erase it all

And it will be gone, 

All of the sadness,

All of the shame,

All of the sorrow,

And all of the blame,

Has been…

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Author's Note

Well? am i getting any better?

Reviews

[zappy]

yes u are geting better

[KatiePie]

I like it. Other than one spelling error "Pleas" should be 'Please'
I love the flow of this and you use repetition very well. Beautiful write, filled with emotion.