A Beautiful Thing, A Scary Risk

A Beautiful Beginning. A Scary Risk    

I know that i am odd, 

I do not even share your beliefs in an all powerful god.

And i know i said I'd listen,

But all i did was lie.

You tolled me to leave her

That you did not want me to get hurt.

And I did not believe you, 

Until the tears where on my shirt.

You've always been looking out for me

even when our past was still very dusty.

I really hope, that you can trust me

Kayla, your voice is like a knifethrust to me,

sending chills down my spine,

make me feel out of reality.

But, the fear of pain,

the fear of hurt,

the fear of constraining you.

the fear of breaking you.

the fear of not knowing how to be with you.

 

Its a beautiful thing, and a scary risk. 

Such a valiant friend, such a gentle kiss.

But is the courage to love,

not also the courage to risk?

a beautiful friendship,

on a beautiful kiss?

Reviews

[JanuaryDreamer♥]

This is a good poem, and I hope it will be. Good job!

[Athena Ramos]

aww~ kayla should read this! she'll be touched!

[the-One-with-the-Darkne..]

Good for you! I'm so happy for you. Us,"(ur fellow writers0 have been her for you too through all this crap that girl put you through. This is extremely well written and I really love your work.

[Calypso]

Well written

[Ruth]

True friends remain! This is lovely work hon, I truly hope it is the start of something special for you :) xx

[Emunah June.]

so cute! You have my blessings, Shane!

[Holly]

This is really great. Nice work!

[Casey Dusek]

This was so good!!! Love is such a beautiful thing, and I hope all works out with you and this girl. You're poem captured your true feelings, perhaps you should share your work with her... :)

[Art]

You are on the right path...true friends stay that way forever and no matter what...turning that into a relationship still does not change that...remember stay friends and you will have a very long friendship and relationship

[Maggie]

Wait and see how it goes, but don't hold back too long...just be honest, that's always the best thing, and make sure you keep on building the friendship. That's more important.