He's not even mine, he never was.

He's not even mine, he never was.

A Poem by horsedreamer

He looks at her,
As I'm looking at him.
He sees her beauty,
I feel the pain.

He looks into her eyes,
And he sees her greatness
As I do when I'm looking at him.

He carefully brushes his lips against hers,
I can only imagine the tenderness and sweetness of him.
He smiles at her,
While I watching him.
Wishing,
Wishing that one day he would look at me like that.

He looks at her,
As I'm looking at him.

© 2013 horsedreamer


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I like how you loop the beginning to the end! Very well written
small spelling - on the 11 line "while i watching him." should be while I'm watching him or while I watch him.

Posted 8 Years Ago


This is a good write. Sure everyone pretty much goes through this kind of thing at one time or another.

Posted 11 Years Ago



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Added on January 23, 2013
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