Other Side

Something that just flew outta me ha

Interesting, that's what this is

it fascinates me, being on the other side

looking at the blank wall 

dirty like always

but you see it differently

your eyes look at my wall

and envy the dirt

or maybe you fail to see it

either way who are you to

even think that I have some sort of

clean slate. some kind of 

silver platter lifestyle

filled with the comforts

of all varieties.

the very fact that you even thought

I've had my happiness handed to me

from the very beginning makes

my blood boil and my vision go red

I pity you for the ignorance you

have. You wouldn't be so quick to 

sign the dotted line if you 

read the fine print. So how is this

any different?

Reviews

[Kyle Sky]

This is really great!!!! What else can i say...

[sheila.j]

:) thank you!!

[RachelReaper]

I love the part where you say "You wouldn't be so quick to sign the dotted line if you read the fine print" this line jumped out at me when I read it, I think it is very clever. :)

[sheila.j]

:) that's one of my favorite lines ha

[Ohhhwillow]

"I pity you for all the ignorance you have", this is f*cking awesome Sheila, and for a quick write even more so. Well done! We ourselves are often quick to judge others who seem problemless while we carry the weight of the world.. We feel envy, just as they do. This is great. :)

[sheila.j]

Thank you!! :)

[Mr.Cardigan]

i like it alot!

[kublakhan27]

The other side, where the grass always looks greener...I'd say this is pretty great for a quick write :)

[sheila.j]

Exactly and thank you :)

[kublakhan27]

No problem :)