Don't Leave Me Alone

short

I can't tell you how many times a night

I lie here and wonder how this is right

And I'm scared I'll never know sleep again

Because every scar I have is being reopened

I see how it's not beautiful to be broken

I know my words are everything but spoken

So please just take my hand tonight

And lay here holding me so tight

Because love I cant do this all alone

I'm begging you don't leave me on my own.

Author's Note

Short late night/early morning poem...any thoughts?

Reviews

[Kyle Sky]

Simple and lovely. Short but good execution of mood was very well admired. Good piece.

[sheila.j]

Thank you!

[cimmy wuv xxxooo]

Very touching, romantic and emotional, about anyone in particular?
I really enjoyed that read keep writing :)

[sheila.j]

Thank you! And yeah it is about someone :)

[cimmy wuv xxxooo]

its very cute and romantic this guy is lucky to such a sweet poem dedicated to him :)

[Hester Vane]

Beautiful and full of raw emotion! Great Job

[Deepankar]

I loved the line "I know my words are everything but spoken". :)

[kublakhan27]

Very poignant and powerful piece...I like it :)

[sheila.j]

Thank you

[Mark Anthony Games (Hum..]

Very honest write, short but not lacking in emotion. Very good write.

[sheila.j]

Thank you

[QuietlyCrash]

This is short but very powerful. Lovely wording, sad message. Nice job.

[sheila.j]

Thank you