Always

It was always this room

In this house

On this road

In this town

It will always be this life

With this mind

In this body

With those times

It will always be this memory

In this nightmare

From this scene

In this chair

 

Author's Note

I know it's short but that's how I felt it should be

Reviews

[kublakhan27]

I think it is just the perfect length...it flows wonderfully, and sounds very much life how I feel in times of reflection and reminiscence...great work :)

[sheila.j]

Thank you!

[Kyle Sky]

Good job. It was simple, short, and subtle. It seems quite vague to what is being expressed, but I think that's what's great about it. A decent piece.

Though I have a few ideas of what the poem meant, may I ask what exactly were you trying to express? Nonetheless,a decent piece

[sheila.j]

Thank you..it was meant to be vague. I'm curious as to what your ideas of what it meant are

[Kyle Sky]

Well I had many ideas come to mind on the poem, but most of them were quite random though they had resemblance. But basically, I think that the poem is saying that it will always be as it is in your life a scene that cannot be changed. It is a nightmare to it think to so, but that scene will haunt you through life,always.
Well that what i think, I hope it was what you were trying to express. Still, it's a good poem all the same.

[cimmy wuv xxxooo]

Very different hun, i like the way it flows and the way its set out.
It was well written thats what i like about it.
Nice short read keep on writing :)

[sheila.j]

Thank you! I'm glad you liked it. It was definitely not like most of my writing (:

[cimmy wuv xxxooo]

your most welcome anytime :)

[Mike Cole]

You are right about it needing to be short it is very good you are talented I think that you should keep writing!

[sheila.j]

Thank you! Writing is my passion and I doubt I will ever stop :)