Forget

Forget

Forget him
forget his face
Forget his kiss
his warm embrace,

Forget the love that you once knew
remember he has someone new

Forget the times he held you tight
remember he's with her tonight

Forget, all the love that you shared
cause he's with her now so he never cared

Remember when your heart, opened up
to have him stab it, man that sucks

Forget all the, "I would leave you never"
and remember that he's gone forever!


 

Reviews

[Trigorin]

Not bad. I think the last couplet is a little trite and you might want to rework it a little - it's just anticlimactic compared to the buildup in the first part of the poem - but other than that, you've expressed yourself very well here. Well done.

[Finding my mind]

Great poem! Beautiful and true in so many ways! I wish I could write poetry like this.