Death Trap

Thinking in the darkness is a death trap,

and I'm it's favourite prey.

Reviews

[Emily]

Love this!!
Keep on writing!

[iamshadowine]

thank you!!

[Coyote Song]

This has a cold chill to it and its very powerful.
Such a trap to be in. (Shiver)

[iamshadowine]

Thank you ^_^

[Coyote Song]

You're very welcome.

[Daisy]

I love how in just one sentence this tells a lot. Love it

[iamshadowine]

Thank you ^_^

[Heather]

Sometimes it's the darkness that opens our eyes to life, great work as per

[iamshadowine]

thank you!!

[Asfa Sheikh]

Silent but a great message.....

[iamshadowine]

thank you!!

[aziza]

Short and nice

[iamshadowine]

thank you :D

[andrew mitchell]

I thought this little piece was clever. Thanks for sharing dear poet!

[iamshadowine]

Thank you!!

[jusstuf]

Very thought provoking with a deep message. Well done.

[iamshadowine]

Thank you so much ^_^

[Vatsal Rohilla (account..]

Another short piece which says a lot. However, there are some chinks in the wall-
The entire piece could be written as-
"Thinking in darkness is a death trap,
and I am its favourite prey."
Anyways, these are fine lines that deserve commendation. Keep writing.

[iamshadowine]

thank you :D

[Shabeeh Haider]

so simple yet so deep. Loved this quote.

[iamshadowine]

thank you :D