Memories.Love.

PRESENT:

Now all I can do is stare him with her

and feel jealous.

Looking at them getting closer

and loving each other

*Sorry, let me tell you my mistake, let me tell you my past*

PAST:

I was on a trip,

with my best friend and him.

He and I became real good friends,

but I started feeling more of it.

The trip became the most precious memory to me,

It was the only place where he and I should be.

Everything seemed so beautiful,

Everything seemed so pretty,

Everything seemed so mine.

We had so much fun,

It was a lifetime memory indeed.

The trip was over,

but my feelings weren't.

Maybe I wanted to confess it to him,

but I never wanted to ruin what we had.

I called in for a get together,

And seeing him with someone else,

Made me uncomfortable...

He started liking her,

He got over me,

He got over whatever we had,

He still remained my friend,

like before,

But for me,

I fell in love with him.

Author's Note

P.S. This is my first poem on love ever :)

Reviews

[Coyote Poetry]

A sad poem for love.
"He got over whatever we had,
He still remained my friend,
like before,
But for me,
I fell in love with him."
Love is never fair. We want too little or we want too much. Thank you for sharing the excellent poetry.
Coyote

[iamshadowine]

Thank you so much :)

[Coyote Poetry]

You are welcome.

[CassiopiaBlack]

Lost love. Is there a greater pain?

[iamshadowine]

I assume not :)

[ElliottKM]

Good poem. Definitely a lot people can relate to there, and I like having the present then the past.

[iamshadowine]

Thank you :D

[Pink Pastel]

Great it made me think about my past lol

[iamshadowine]

Thank you😊

[Pink Pastel]

Your welcome

[Bhumika Devkota]

Nice job for a first attempt. I liked what you did in the beginning.

[iamshadowine]

Thank you😊

[Ashwin Shanker]

Simple stuff, could have explored more word play.

[iamshadowine]

Thank you 😊

[D]

Ugh... The heartbreaking scenes ....I had the,memories come back while reading. Well penned. :)

[iamshadowine]

thank you :D

[D]

You're welcome. :)

[Meshalini]

You done it very well...
very lovely...

[iamshadowine]

Thank you !

[Shabeeh Haider]

Your first poem on love and a sad one at that. It can be unfortunate when you feel that special love for a friend and they cannot reciprocate it.
Nicely written

[iamshadowine]

thank you :D

[faithmuriithi]

So captivating. I love this.

[iamshadowine]

Thank you 😊