Broken Me

Broken Me

A Poem by Shuchita

It was all good
until you decided to come back 
and break me again

© 2017 Shuchita


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Oh but dear, once something is broken, it cannot be mended as whole as it once was again.
Still, that was always the cycle - to love, to hope, and to be broken.
Thank you for sharing a meaningful poem.

Posted 2 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Shuchita

2 Years Ago

thank you!!
Try to be hpy..... They Dnt get back their lv... Who r real..... Only fake people can enjoy d so called lv

Posted 2 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Shuchita

2 Years Ago

thank you for your review
So very sad to be broken "again". Powerful and vulnerable write. Hard to close the heart, once opened.... time heals all they say...

Posted 2 Years Ago


Shuchita

2 Years Ago

thank you!
Repeat pain. Very foolish. Most of us need to learn again. Honest and true thoughts in the words. Thank you my friend for sharing the amazing poetry.
Coyote

Posted 3 Years Ago


Shuchita

2 Years Ago

thank you ^_^
Coyote Poetry

2 Years Ago

You are welcome.
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So sad. I have been put through that too, more than once. It is never easy, but we do get through it. Nicely penned.

Posted 3 Years Ago


Shuchita

3 Years Ago

thank you :)
SJ Mullins

3 Years Ago

You're welcome!
Not easy to mend the broken pieces but to have to piece them together twice does weaken us somewhat...

Posted 3 Years Ago


Shuchita

3 Years Ago

true :) thanks for reading
That's how it goes. Keep going.

Posted 3 Years Ago


Shuchita

3 Years Ago

thanks ^_^
Owwww. Twice burned. A short yet powerful piece of writing.

Posted 3 Years Ago


Shuchita

3 Years Ago

thanks :))
So short but meaningful and emotional. Nicely done

Posted 3 Years Ago


Shuchita

3 Years Ago

Thank you very much :)
haha it was the recoil. A witty write.:)

Posted 3 Years Ago


Shuchita

3 Years Ago

thank you! :)

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