foretold

What if there is an NLE as well.

was crushed and crashed

-slowly losing

 

consciousness-

 

.                .                  .

 

up in your arms

 

you took me

 

i had a

 

near

love

experience

Author's Note

A near-death experience (NDE) refers to a broad range of personal experiences associated with impending death, encompassing multiple possible sensations including detachment from the body; feelings of levitation; extreme fear; total serenity, security, or warmth; the experience of absolute dissolution; and the presence of a light.
Source - Wikipedia

Reviews

[Chloe..Across the Unive..]

nothing wrong with love - and i like this so much ..

" i had a near love expierience" .. nice !

Chloe

[abhas]

the author's note is as charming as the poem itself...:)
and its best told with only a few words... a " near love experience" ... that's a great expression...

[Reena]

Even the reader has the same experience on reading your lines and your confession in the author's note too is not without charm.

[An owl on the moon]

There is a story here, in and between the lines.. something that screams to be heard. Your last line is simply a brilliant summary.

[Rossen]

Poetry seems to revolve around feeling, what feeling is better then Amore?

you flow with the spirit of Apollo,


nice way to wright,

Rossen

[NoneOfYourBusiness akaK..]

soars~ absolutely soars . . . .

[Nothing Personal]

love how yo bring NDE to NLE...it's fascinating what NLE(Near Love Experience) could potentially mean..left me wanting..well done..

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[Christie Moses]

Love is one of the most powerful universal emotions :) It is, in all its forms, beautiful and painful.
Bittersweet and lovely write.

[Bubo]

Love is what glues the world together, and having an experience of love makes us real. Beautiful.