foretold

What if there is an NLE as well.

was crushed and crashed

-slowly losing

 

consciousness-

 

.                .                  .

 

up in your arms

 

you took me

 

i had a

 

near

love

experience

Author's Note

A near-death experience (NDE) refers to a broad range of personal experiences associated with impending death, encompassing multiple possible sensations including detachment from the body; feelings of levitation; extreme fear; total serenity, security, or warmth; the experience of absolute dissolution; and the presence of a light.
Source - Wikipedia

Reviews

[Sel Whiteley]

Always writing about love isn't a bad thing at all. Like the structure to this piece, it almost suggests a crushed body. The sonics are fantastic as well, love the sibilance which again suggests the feeling of a "near love experience."

[paul]

great title. and the ending too

[Aidz]

Dont fight it..... love it :) kewl write

[Robin]

love it , very imaginative my friend .