Life That is a Lie

Life That is a Lie

A Poem by Silent Pacer
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This was written by me about three summers ago, it came to me after a weird dream where I had tea with Steven Tyler and a sock....

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Your life's a lie

You sit and cry

Alone inside

Wishing to die

Your life is a lie.

 

Slit your wrist

And watch it bleed

A crimson waterfall

Of deceit

Let it dry out

Till you're no good

Why do you have to be misunderstood?

© 2008 Silent Pacer


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Opps...haha, the one aspect of english I am poor in is grammer and spelling, you are correct that it should be 'you're' rather then 'your'. thanks, I'll change that now.

Posted 16 Years Ago


Emotional and sad. Good write. A bit of a question though, this part...

'Till your no good'

Should it not be 'you're' instead of your? I'm not sure though... so I'm asking...

Posted 16 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.


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Silent Pacer
Silent Pacer

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I'm Me, and sometimes me, but only half of the time, then I become something that resembles me. But in all seriousness, I am looking for constructive criticism about my work since I am trying to fur.. more..

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