Traditional Haikus

Traditional Haikus

A Poem by Silent Pacer
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There are two poems here, but the format is really short so I put them on the same page.

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Circle of Life

Sun rises sun sets

Life is born Life is taken

Things will always change

 

 

Silence Must Be Heard

Silence of the night

Moon’s pale light shows the path

For evils pray

© 2008 Silent Pacer


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I like these. I love haikus but never really got the hang of writing them.

Posted 16 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Thank you Very much. I am a very new writer and I'm glad that you like it. And I also agree with you that few words keen truly paint a bigger story. Thankyou

Posted 16 Years Ago


Your Haikus are so great! To me it is an unbelievable great discovery that one is able to tell the biggest story, the wonderfulst greatness in only a few words!

You've done a marvelous job here. Thumb up. I like those very much.

Posted 16 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.


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Added on March 21, 2008

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Silent Pacer
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