Psycho Overload Stuff... dude... um... man.

There are three different poems here, two are called prepositional poetry, one is what is called an adverbial poem.

(abverbial)

The Play of a Basset

 

Loudly they exclaim

 

Bravely the charge

Soundly they stand upon their foe

Comically they trip over their long ears

Coolly the basset hound pretends that they meant to do that

 

(prepositional)

Inside a Tormented Mind

 

Inside my head I lie and wait

 

Without any answer and no sure escapes

Through these torments I must sit and suffer

Without I will be just like every other

Is this how my mind should be

The Ominous

 

Once upon a fair nights breeze

 

Into the alley no one can sees

Beyond this a door of black

Inside this with no looks back

At this point I wake from the dream

Reviews

[nothing grinner]

Dam it was a dream all along,lol but very good. x

[Silent Pacer]

lol, oh, I dont know, I am a bit psycho.. I swear.
thanks, I have a habit of typing differently then I think, so odds are I meant to write 'my mind' but kinda didnt. thanks for pointing it out.

[alternative_be]

This doesn't seem like psycho overload stuff to me!
I can picture the basset right in front of me... very funny and that's a good thing coming from me LOL

The prepositional poems:
You have the ability to describe your state of mind in a very adequate way. However you seem to have written 'am mind' instead of 'my mind'.

You're anything but a psycho. You seem sound enough to me!