In the forest of night.
A Poem by Silent Pacer
Cold brisk air of night
Unwillingly subdued
Till I wake again
© 2008 Silent Pacer
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ooh, chilly
Posted 16 Years Ago
1 of 1 people found this review constructive.
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Simple
Deep
great work!
Posted 16 Years Ago
1 of 1 people found this review constructive.
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The words you chose, make this poem very strong, and maybe even to some touching.
Posted 16 Years Ago
1 of 1 people found this review constructive.
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I like these tpye of writings.. 3 lines that say much.. i can feel the cold air in the forest and the being subdued .. unwillingly till finally awakening .. enjoyed this .
Chloe
xoxo
Posted 16 Years Ago
2 of 2 people found this review constructive.
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Added on March 25, 2008
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Silent PacerMiddle of Nowhere
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I'm Me, and sometimes me, but only half of the time, then I become something that resembles me.
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