Lovers of the Fog

Lovers of the Fog

A Poem by Remanence
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A walk in the mists.

"
Droplets of water
descend like halos upon 
those who walk in mists.

© 2021 Remanence


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This Haiku is so gentle, just like the mists that drift across the farmer's fields and the river first thing on some summer mornings. I felt that fine layer on my skin and the damp in my hair. Wonderfully visual Watercress. Droplets descending like halos, is perfectly lovely.

Chris

Posted 2 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Remanence

2 Years Ago

Thank you Chris, it is so encouraging to read your reviews and many say you are the gold standard, b.. read more
Chris Shaw

2 Years Ago

You are far too kind Watercress.



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This Haiku is so gentle, just like the mists that drift across the farmer's fields and the river first thing on some summer mornings. I felt that fine layer on my skin and the damp in my hair. Wonderfully visual Watercress. Droplets descending like halos, is perfectly lovely.

Chris

Posted 2 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Remanence

2 Years Ago

Thank you Chris, it is so encouraging to read your reviews and many say you are the gold standard, b.. read more
Chris Shaw

2 Years Ago

You are far too kind Watercress.

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Added on May 29, 2021
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Tags: Mists, halos, water, walk, descend, droplets

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