A Poem by Simply Whitney

I don't know what to do,

at the time it felt so right.

I would have never assumed this before,

most likely end up in a fight.

Not with people,

but with myself.

Because I'll be hurt

and my heart be put on a shelf.

Left there waiting and shattered,

screaming for attention.

Then that time came,

and nothing felt better than the love and affection.

Confusion consumes me

as I disappointed others.

I might have lost some respect,

but then again, no one is perfect.

It's over and done with,

I can't change the past.

I just have to accept it,

and keep memories that will last.


© 2008 Simply Whitney

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you seem confused
but the poem wasnt
which is the good thing about it. you want your work to be different and creative but no that confusing to the reader which is good. keep it up youll be even better the more you write

Posted 14 Years Ago

I'm confused....

Posted 14 Years Ago

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Added on July 12, 2008


Simply Whitney
Simply Whitney

LaPlace, LA

well I am Whitney. I have a passion for writing and music so this is pretty much why I joined this shindig but anyways, I am fourteen and I love being myself and to stand out and I do pretty rad job d.. more..

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