In Love

In Love

A Poem by Writer at last! Sky ~



In Love

You be the clouds
I'll be the rain

You be the lips
I'll be the smile

You be the eye's
I'll be the tears

You be the heart
I'll be the love

You be the moon
I'll be the shine

You be the story
I'll be the memory 

&

Lastly 

You be in me
I'll be no more. . .

© 2024 Writer at last! Sky ~


Author's Note

Writer at last! Sky ~
This is dedicated to Grandpa. My dearest Grandpa passed away when he has my hand in his hand at his last sigh. I still remember that moment very clearly. During the very last sigh my Grandpa looked at my Grandmother and he left his body turning into a beautiful soul. I will never forget that moment in my lifetime. Grandpa and Grandma I miss you both very very much . . .

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You be in me, I'll be no more..i now cant get these 8 words out of my head..a lasting impression and simply yet wonderfully delivered..

Posted 5 Years Ago


Writer at last! Sky ~

5 Years Ago

Thanks Tara. You can't get out those 8 words out of your head & I never wants to get out them from m.. read more
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I never had the fortune of having grandparents, had my maternal grandpa but he passed away when I was 7.
You've made a soulful tribute to your Grandfather. Be happy for he was there and not sad for he's gone.
Be blessed.

Posted 5 Years Ago


Writer at last! Sky ~

5 Years Ago

Sad to know about your grandparents. Thanks for appreciating the work. I'll take your suggestion pos.. read more
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5 Years Ago

You're welcome! =)
This is beautiful, simple, but deep. Thanks for sharing about your Grandparents. It's nice to have the background information behind a piece. Well done.

Posted 5 Years Ago


Writer at last! Sky ~

5 Years Ago

Thanks Mel. Yes, it's close to my heart as I see my grandparents through it. Thank you for your visi.. read more

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Added on February 11, 2020
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