Preserving love

Heartfelt cries
Enduring lies
Bloodstained tears
Forever years
Shadowed life
Voices cut just like a knife
Eternal sorrow
Lasts in the morrow
Brand new scars
Strongest bars
Trapped inside my mind
My family leaving me behind
Golden bitterness
Lost in the joy of song
Preserving love
Sent from above
In the midst of pain
Hope will find us again

Reviews

[}Echo{]

I really like this. I like how it starts out with hopelessness and dispair, but then ends in hope. :)

[marie]

The hope of hope I thought it was pretty good:)

[Sami Khalil]

I like the ending.

[marie]

thanks :)

[Sami Khalil]

You are welcome.

[Ethale Captor]

I see you have put the lines of one of my poems to use. I believe this one sounds better.

[marie]

What can I say I was inspired and yours sounds wayyyy better

[Ethale Captor]

I deny that.

[marie]

go ahead but i still think yours sounds better:)