jabirs revenge part 4

please let me know how i'm doin and please message me if you have any questions or ideas for the future updates

March. 2

this pressure in my head grows every day!! it seems as it is never silent…ADINA!!!you said you would help me!! i thought you where a friend!! i thought…no…no you can't be back!!! go away!! you have to leave!! you have to!! please go… please…you just left…please…no no no no!! HE'S GONE NOE WHAT MORE DO YOU WANT?! I AM ALONE!!!…go away…please go away…

March 5. 

i had to leave the safe place…the maybe is true…the hurt is back…and i hear her instead of him..please…they said if i called for you, that you would answer… please answer me… get rid of her… she took Jabir….she took Adina….please…you have to make her go….

March 8.

WHY?! did these people lie to me as well?! you have not answered.. so they must be lying….i will make them pay….no…..i can't its wrong all they did was help me!! …..she's right…they lied….i have to make them pay…

March 11.

i am so lost….the peace i found in losing them is gone….why? why oh why? They called you God….if you are save me….make her leave… please make her leave

March16.

where is she? i have to find her.. i know i asked her to leave,but what do i do now?! who does she torment now? i have to find her.. make her pay…

March 23.

these people that watch me are so useless they don't know who she is… they simply stare at me as if i am the dung on their shoes… i will follow her… they will not do as such again… not one will

March 28.

i can't speak…they only laugh.. only stare.. why do they stare? i hate it when they stare…i will make them all leave… she cannot keep me away forever….she is mine.. she will not win.. she is weak..i will destroy her.. she has no right to roam this earth

March 31.

come play little bunny… we have much to learn

Reviews

[A.j. Dru]

Interesting. I have no context here, so I can't really give a solid review, but I do want you to know that I am reading. Keep it up. I'll have to come back to this one later...

[marie]

this is one that is a little confusing, but as people read on, and i get around to adding more everything will become clear:)

[Ethale Captor]

As excellent as I expected it to be. I look forward to the next chapter.

[marie]

thank you:) hopefully i can get it up soon without making you wait so long as i did this time:)

[Ethale Captor]

It is fine, take your time. That is how great works are made.

[marie]

i know, just dont like keeping everyone waiting, makes me think that people will lose interest

[Ethale Captor]

The ones who are still interested are the ones worthy to read it.

[marie]

so.....you and nick?

[Ethale Captor]

Perhaps, if we are the only ones willing to wait for the next part.

[marie]

but i want lots of people to reads this!!! *sniffles*

[Ethale Captor]

Not everything is an instant best-seller.

[marie]

i know.... but still *watery eyes*

[Ethale Captor]

It may be a best-seller one day.

[marie]

..you...you really think so? *perks up slightly*

[Ethale Captor]

Perhaps.

[marie]

so it wont?

[Ethale Captor]

Do I look like I can predict the future?

[marie]

uhmmmm.....

[Ethale Captor]

............ Only sometimes.

[marie]

but still...

[Ethale Captor]

I can guess. Would you like for me to guess?

[marie]

uhhhhhh......maaayyybeeee....

[Ethale Captor]

Well, to do so, I will need a mysterious, cloudy, crystal ball to accompany me on this incredibly dumb feat, as well as a long, black cape and a ridiculously large witch hat.

[Ethale Captor]

And a black cat.

[marie]

well grandma has ginger, i have a witch hat. we can find a magic ball. but can you make the cape?

[Ethale Captor]

If I find time.

[Nick.B]

Interesting that a new character stepped in "ADINA"...also I admire how she is still calling on god after all this...well done writing this chapter

[marie]

I hope to keep God a very important factor in this, i'm glad you liked it, i'll have the next month up soon:)

[marie]

the next part is up, the site is being stupid so i can't send a request sorry