~Kiss in the rain

Union of virility and feminity

Pelting droplets in the lane;
Virile mars walks in rain.
Going where his footsteps led..
He stretches the umbrella over his head.

Defending himself against the critical droplets,
With a guarded formidable exterior,
Backbone made from a rod of steel..
Striving towards his goal with a zeal.

His breath is caught in his throat,
As he watches venus moving as a bolt.
Water washes over her lovely face,

Chilly wind blows away his defence from his grasp;
Replaced by her tender understanding hands..
She tiptoes ,whispering kindly in his ears
"Life is not waiting for the storm to pass dear,
It is learning to dance in the rain"
Brushing her soft lips against his..
They reach a state of bliss..
Yearning droplets flow from their tangled bodies..
Shimmering as some glittering rubies..

Lightening strikes her twice;
He fiercely hugs her tight.
Answering her relieved sigh-
"It was not a flash which came by,
But a realisation that- you are only mine"

The thunder roars his approval..
At the union of Mars and venus so real..!!
On the blessed earth's surface..
The almighty divinely paired,
Our human race.....

Author's Note

A concept of Mars and venus;masculinity and feminity- the primal pair.. Questions were raised am i a man- hater,ha ..:) so here it goes- the combination of both,blended together into a tale.Hope you like the taste..

Reviews

[anne]

A beautiful write with very well used metaphors.......
last paragraph was so connecting.....

[Sophy Freebirds]

Thank you Anne for your encouraging words ;)

[raj24]

you are not man hater..u just made this guy fell in love with this picture..
Life is not waiting for the storm to pass dear,
It is learning to dance in the rain"

i loved their union..loved it...rain adding to its beauty..lots of passion and warmth...i love the stories..n this one was beautiful..thanks for writing it..:)

Raj

[Sophy Freebirds]

Thanks Raj for the wonderful review. Just wanted to say that however strong a man may be he needs a kind hand,and a woman always needs someone to feel the warmth of affection.Mutual living. ;)

[raj24]

thats the truth of life...we all are one soul in different bodies..we need each other...:)

[Sophy Freebirds]

Yea... you got that right.. fast brain.. ha :)

[raj24]

trying my best to match your wave length :)

[Sophy Freebirds]

Thats good.. or else the signals can' t be amplified. ★ winks★

[LizzyLK4]

I love your use of metaphors here. Very well written!

[Sophy Freebirds]

Thank you so much lizzy ;)

[LizzyLK4]

You're very welcome! :)