~Voyage to the Unknown....

~Voyage to the Unknown....

A Poem by Sophy Freebirds
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When persona comes awake to psyche's call..

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Moon's clock strikes midnight;
Conciousness fades away ....
In the uncertain mist....

Persona comes wake to psyche's call,
Burying the huge mast of sentient thoughts...
Taken on this voyage of Unknown Destination;
Caged in this whirlwind of trepidation...

My mind's eye opens to a sight.....

Ashen faces void of any emotion;
Lips sewn in black thread of premonition....
Forbidden to give away their thoughts.....
They shake their heads in mock Nods...

Shrouded in Dawn's budding twilight,
My subconscious is gifted with Foresight....

Adorned with Augury for the future,
I have some flairs yet to nurture..
While travelling through this critical juncture....

~Sophy Freebirds ©

© 2015 Sophy Freebirds


Author's Note

Sophy Freebirds
Gift of foresight is granted to some.But they don't give away everything. Enjoy!! ;)

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A beautifully penned, thought provoking piece....My mind's eyes open to a sight....appeals to me the most and it too has a beautiful ending....
Adorned with Augury for the future
I have some flairs yet to nurture
While traveling through this critical juncture....excellent... :))

Posted 10 Years Ago


Sophy Freebirds

10 Years Ago

Thank you so much Anne.. ;) glad you liked it
dreams can be confusing...premonitions even more so...
a very well written and thought provoking piece from your talented pen.

:) Julie

Posted 10 Years Ago


Sophy Freebirds

10 Years Ago

Thank you so much dear;) i am humbled
Dream conciousness is so enticing at least for me. The ambivalence of the question Am I awake or not and if I am not who is the one thing this stuff? But that aside for a moment. The acknowledgment that there is a journey at you seem to be an spectator looking around discovering and amongts all that you have found something a view into your destiny maybe? An insight of sorts maybe. Stop and stare you did but then you decided to keep on going to se what the future brings.

Great journey.

Thankyou

Posted 10 Years Ago


Sophy Freebirds

10 Years Ago

Thank you Rene.. you nailed it on head... a dream of what the future beholds. :)
If only I were wise enough to see...
My gift is hindsight. Beautifully written and thought provoking piece.

Posted 10 Years Ago


Sophy Freebirds

10 Years Ago

Ohh dearie :) thank you so much sweetie
Matching Socks

10 Years Ago

Anytime. :)
An eerily mystical and ominous piece of work, dreams and premonitions, we never know what they're truly about, foresight is usually that gut instinct that few too many people notice or listen to...another fantabulous gift from your ink Sophy. :) x

Posted 10 Years Ago


Sophy Freebirds

10 Years Ago

Ahh.. :) gracias N***a.. glad you liked it sweetie.
No one can be certain what the future holds. Tomorrow is always the unknown, but those who are wise know it is the only place to go....into the future....the unknown will become known when the time is right and we will deal with it as it is revealed. Premonitions are ofttimes frightening. I have learned to accept them, but not dwell on them. Very well written....intense. Lydi**

Posted 10 Years Ago


Sophy Freebirds

10 Years Ago

Thank you so much Lydi.. i am learning to accept that too.. :)

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Sophy Freebirds
Sophy Freebirds

Balangir, Odisha, India



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Christened as Sophy i try to live up to this name.Introduction is something i am never good at.But if you want to know me,read me. My Real name is Ankita Sagar.Will be turning 19 soon this Septembe.. more..

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