Prologue

Prologue

A Chapter by sorellaflowers

 

                The moment I awoke from my dreams I knew something was wrong, the air filled with tension, fear, although the only thing that made me snap awake was the smell of blood. Slowly I made my way across the cold wooden floor, door creaking softly as I stepped into the hallway, soft carpet greeting my cold feet. Mouth opened as I attempted to call out to my parents, fear made speaking impossible. Turning the corner, I saw light through the crack of my parent’s door, hesitantly pushing it open my worst nightmare come true. Blood splattered along the carpet, the white walls stained with red, some managing to reach the ceiling, body parts of my beloved parents in various places across the room. Tears cascaded down my face as laughter filled my small ears.

            “Don’t be afraid little one, we’ll be your new family” Came a scratchy voice

Two people covered in blood watched me, sadistic smiles on their drenched faces, both tall compared to my small body, muscles clearly visible causing fear to course through me. I did the only thing I was good at, running.

            Ten years old I lost my parents, ran away from what I learned was people from the Coven,  six years has passed now,  six years since I have been in my human form, learned I could even shift into a fox, learned I was a bender, six years have passed and I am still running.



© 2011 sorellaflowers


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sorellaflowers
Sorry it's short, please comment, I can only become a better writer with critique

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Creepy stuff here. Would have liked a little more, of course. seemed a little rushed and dare I say, un-emotional. To find your parents slaughtered and dismembered would be quite the sight. Maybe a little more nasty details and interaction with the killers could have have drawn more into this chapter here. But thats just me. Other then that, a dark creepy chapter here. I liked the way you ended it also.

Posted 9 Years Ago


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Creepy stuff here. Would have liked a little more, of course. seemed a little rushed and dare I say, un-emotional. To find your parents slaughtered and dismembered would be quite the sight. Maybe a little more nasty details and interaction with the killers could have have drawn more into this chapter here. But thats just me. Other then that, a dark creepy chapter here. I liked the way you ended it also.

Posted 9 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.


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O.o creepers wana know but im not telling =P, WA



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Well I won't give you my real name, I plan to publish my writing someday, I go by sorella, to be honest I don't write to become famous, thats not my dream at all, I write to be heard, my views, though.. more..

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