Affected

This love I hold for you is not what I expected,
The time you walked out I felt rejected
If there could of been a soul reflected,
It would of been both of ours, who would of guessed it??
My love for you was deflected,
You decided that you didn't want me to get you infected
I obliged and even cried when I kept walking as you said; Loving you is something best not selected.

Reviews

[ScarlettTheDreamer]

beautiful piece. I liked it.

[Ruth]

Sometimes we have to stand back and make harsh decisions!
A good piece hon
xx

[Bhavya Kaushik]

I found this piece very intriguing and amazing at the same time. Very well penned!

[Fallacy Pharmacy]

The rhyming is AMAZING; the 'ected' makes the poem sound even stronger then it already is. The flow is very, very good too-another amazing poem :)

[Wicahpi]

aw so sad and a boys loss!

[Coyote Poetry]

I like the flow of the words. A excellent poem. Sometime we are better off alone then with someone who will take us down. A excellent poem. A powerful story.
Coyote