Animation Bleeds in Color

   Her animation bleeds color

Chromatic(RED) hue flames with botheration

Puritanial(BLUE) creases tears born in fear

Achromatic(WHITE) absorbs iniquity into her reflection

Rhetorical(PURPLE) voices are incognizable

Alizarine(ORANGE-RED) imbues a heart breathing lamentation

Viridity(GREEN) shades inclination with dubiousness

Scandalmongering(YELLOW) gossip weaves unpretentious affectation

Goethite(BROWN) rust her persona and facades into despair

Intermediate(GRAY) self reconciles the populace will never change

So, calamitous(BLACK) semblance is a reality of defeat,

and her animation bleeds in color

   

Author's Note

What do you think? Something a little different.

Reviews

[Tam Warink]

I'm seeing a new line of water color names. "Calamitous(BLACK)" ... "Scandalmongering(YELLOW)" ... there are stories galore in that set of paint tins. Too bad they don't use little tins anymore. The plastic doesn't have the same sound. As soon-to-be author's of childrens literature perhaps you should take this opportunity to construct a sequence of fabrications to encourage both young writers and artists and musicians to think in such terms. It's a brilliant, off-beat approach. Select a pile of emotives, color swatches and then let each match them up as suits their fancy. Then the fun begins... write, compose, create with your colorful connectives. Continue... take your brilliance to the next level.

100 scintilating vermillion ewes

[KAREN]

Thank you for your kind words!

[Woody]

wonderful rainbow of colours! well penned in a unique way.
oh and thanks for "botheration" and "incognizable". never heard of those before.

[KAREN]

Thank you very much!

[Jennie Baron]

Yes, good different. I like the way you have tied all the colors together in a coherent word picture.

[KAREN]

Thank you so much!

[Frieda P]

AHH color my world, you did it so well, love the different shades of your brush strokes...especially RED, love the word 'botheration'...it's rarely used.

[KAREN]

Thank you for the nice review.

[Frieda P]

Well deserved, my pleasure....

[Tina Kline]

Very unique and very creative poem.
I enjoyed it a lot.
Very impressive!!

[KAREN]

Thank you so much!

[Tina Kline]

You are most welcome.

[Rossen]

You've become quite the artist...ripe with fervor and mad with screaming colors
and a penchant for creative wonderment...far and away from sisterly cook books
if I remember right..love this vivid play on colors.100/100

Rossen

[KAREN]

Thank you for these kind words!